Comments : Spontaneous Combustion (Trolaan)

  • 14 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Lol, you did a great job. I'll have to look up some of these words myself. XD

    I like the style you wrote it in along with the subject. Five out of five. ^_^

  • 14 years ago

    by Colby

    This poem is well written and very interesting. I had to re-read it a few times to understand it with all the unusual words, but then I saw that was intentional, so hey -- way to go! Great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Joe,
    I was pleased with this poem. Though I do not know the definition to all of the words, I am sure you looked them up before using them. It indeed was a different read and it was nice to see you change your way of writing and step outside the box so to speak. Great Job