Comments : Inside the Liar

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    Ohh Skye aka Inside the liar...this is a brilliant piece...This poem just explores a lil inside of the poet we known as Inside the Liar. I'm glad that danny held this contest as, the club members are able to tell their story behind their names. I guess everyone has an alter ego which they create to help them push beyond the limits of themselves. No doubt this was an enjoyable read.

    Excellent Job

  • 14 years ago

    by Colby

    I like poems that are more of a conversation than a traditional poem. Lose the intentional rhymes, lose the thesaurus to find words you don't even know, and you have an ending product of this poem. It's so much easier to relate, comprehend, and appreciate a well written poem such as this one, versus the ocean of generic, more conservative poems. Great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Great job Skye. This was pretty bad ass. I wanted to snap my fingers at the end while some bald guy with a barett plays the bongo in the background. Tee hee.

    It's powerful and commical. Five ouf of five for being awesome.