*Claps for you* This was beyond good. You have such an easy way of expressing complex emotions. I loved it. Very nice work. Shanik

*Claps for you* This was beyond good. You have such an easy way of expressing complex emotions. I loved it. Very nice work. Shanik

This was very well written. Raw emotion was portrayed, no fancy metaphors. It was straightforwrd, to the point and expressed exactly how you felt, no strings attached. It had great flow and rhyme as well.

'The anger escapes,
With every cut I make...
The hurt escapes,
With every swipe I take...'

^This was my favourite stanza. It was a superb beginning, great flow and it jumped out at me. The repition of the words "The ---- escapes' was very powerful. 5/5

The dark emotion is expressed well in the poem and my hope is that the escape you write of is also escape from abuse. If this is not possible for some I prefer honesty

well done

Aww i really like this poem i can really feel it, it flows so nicely but once again is very sad.
good job at showing emotions
xoxo

I agree, this poem was full of sadness and anger but expressed in a way that the readers would follow easily. The emotions were expressed continuously all throughout the poem.

Amazing. Extremely well written with a very relatable topic. There's nothing wrong with the ryhming and format. It's basically a 'perfect' poemm in my eyes. i love it. keep it up. 5/5. ~KM~

Again, bland and unimaginative, with zero direction or purpose.

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)