Comments : Breeze Of Grace

  • 8 years ago

    by Timothy r

    'No storm can rupture this placid day
    or chase away dreams that wait to grow,
    an unfaltering heart humbly prays
    walking in the breeze of Gods grace."

    What a beautiful line this is, it really brings the poem together, just a suggestion how ever, in the last line in stanza 1, get rid of that puncuation mistake that this site has yet to fix, it`ll make the poem look better. I really enjoyed this poem a great deal, Timothy r

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Meena
    What a beautiful poem

    The delicate morning yawns
    awakening the world with her beam,
    yet another day is born
    and promises arent far to reach.

    This stanza I get a feeling of hope. That this day may turn things around and bring smiles to a sad soul.

    Sparrows upon the mighty oak
    twitter a melody of possibilities,
    yesterdays failure they cloak
    urging wishes to spread its wings.

    What a beautiful picture your words paint for the readers mind. Very uplifting.

    Yellow roses lace the atmosphere
    an incense for rising souls,
    life breathes without a drop of fear
    a sense of renewed hope ignites.

    You can feel the hope building and the fear moving to the background. Great imagery and word choices.

    No storm can rupture this placid day
    or chase away dreams that wait to grow,
    an unfaltering heart humbly prays
    walking in the breeze of Gods grace.

    The ending is awesome. There is no better place to walk.
    excellent!
    Love Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by anand singh

    Excellent and awesome is how I see this beautiful piece.

    No storm can rupture this placid day
    or chase away dreams that wait to grow,
    an unfaltering heart humbly prays
    walking in the breeeze of God's grace.

    Wow, what a beautiful finish.
    A most enjoyable read.
    Keep up the great work.
    Paul...

  • 8 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    5/5.Congrats.
    Excellent work.Starting a day,hopeful to cross over hurdles,with Almighty's blessings.Beautiful write.Keep writing.God bless.