Comments : Orange picker

  • 14 years ago

    by HvN

    Great word choice, absolutely perfect! =]

    The ryme and flow of this piece was very nice, I had to read it over 3 times!

    In a way I can see this being turned into a kids story, nevertheless it is a great piece!

    keep up the good work!

    5/5

    HvN

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I love the words and poetry pattern you used here to even make orange picking seem glamorous
    I feel this was very well written

  • 14 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    Great poem amazing i loved it the flow was good and i honestly enjoyed reading this poem it was great simple topic but you make it unbelieveably interesting 5/5 you are a great writer

  • 14 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    Great poem amazing i loved it the flow was good and i honestly enjoyed reading this poem it was great simple topic but you make it unbelieveably interesting 5/5 you are a great writer

  • 14 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This is different to the poetry I normally choose to read but I must say I reallyenjoyed it, the structure you used was perfectly suited to the piece and your chioce of wording was great =]
    Great job - oh and nice consistant flow used too!