Comments : Will i ever be the same..

  • 14 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    Awsome poem, it shows how truly sad you are feeling, the amount of emotion in the poem is also amazing, honesty goes a long way and it certainly did for you in this poem 5/5 congratz

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This wasn't a bad poem hun. When the feelings you express come from the heart, nothing can go wrong. I love way you write it's very deatiled and emotoional. I don't read many friendship poems, but I'm glad I read this one. Nice work. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    This was a sad poem, a scene beautifully and wonderfully depicted. Though, the beginning began wonderfully, the flow and rhyme seemed to cease and disappear as it neared the middle.

    I loved the way that you didn't confine yourself to the common 4 line stanzas. 4/5

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    I always love poems that are written from the heart. Genuine feelings always will touch the readers heart. The flow was actually perfect except for you giving up your happiness, i think that line was a little awkward there..That was just an opinion and i totally respect how you want it this way..I hope by writing this, would ease the longingness and pain you are having inside. It was beautifully written contradicting to what you have stated in your post..Good Job..

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I love friendship poems.. and this one is so touching, LOL. Very well written, and expressed.

  • 13 years ago

    by morgan

    I love the feeling behind the words. they scream sadness and reality. it is very well written. truly a great poem. :)