Comments : Your Shoes

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    This was really good Skye and it shows by your poetry and in the way you expressed yourself in this poem. The flow was also good in this poem and like he said above you noted common things that some people don't think about when they like someone. So once again good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wow! I absolutely adored this piece Skye. Indeed in life we wish to know how someone feels, we wish we could just jump into their life and live it for a few days to discover how they truly feel, not knowing how they feel can be extremely frustrating..

    Well done.
    I really really enjoyed this write.
    I think so many of us can relate to this.

    5/5.

    Temps

  • 14 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is really a interesting write. I wrote something little similar to this long back. I enjoyed your writing creativity here! Well done!