This is a thought provoking piece. I like the word choice although I was wondering why you chose to say sighing lightly instead of softly.

A brilliant write, that really made me think. I enjoyed this piece, you have much talent, making the reader ponder what you have written about, such a thought-provoking poem. Congrats on the win, you deserved it! God Bless You!

~MaryAnne

Congrats on your win :)