Wow. This like a song. I could hear the notes being played as I read. Loved the diction of the piece! VERY WELL WRITTEN, my fav parts were the "stand and fight!" parts. Again, I loved it!

5/5
Wishmaster

This is very deep! And interesting. I love the repitition of the first line, and the second lines that follow that with a different rhyme. It was my favorite part. :-) Beautiful!
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