This simplistic if I shall call it that, feeling.. definatly is felt by a lot of us. That lonely feeling, the empty heart, after someone is gone. The memories on longer are there, they no longer shine.. your heart is just empty and that is quite a strong emotion.. I compliment you on your form here, I thought it was a great choice for the main fact that you were repeating the line that said your heart was empty, this shows emphasis and the main idea of the poem, the main message, and it definatly brings sadness to the reader.

Well done Jad.

5/5.

Temps

This is short and really nice. The flow is great and the structure good. Your sentenres are well writen too. A couple of repetitions in your lines too kind of emphasizes what you feel. A great write.

This is a very emotional question thus you chose the perfect style to accent it

Now where does my love abide

I like it

The thoughts, images, and pictures,
Once were there but no longer lure.

*I know this feeling all too well. I think this ws your best poem. I loved the style and the simple way it flowed. The words you use express your pain so well and s clearly. I really enjoyed this one my friend. Keep it up. Nik*

I like your usage of abide.

I also like the repetition.

FIve out of five.

Good work. :]

A very short yet powerfull poem =] Again your wording added more depth to the piece and created the imagery within my head, The use of repetition was also a nice touch. The structure is really very good and the flow was perfect.

Heartfilled. short and sweet. 5/5

This was a well written poem, not the best but still well done. The flow was wonderful as well as capturing the attention of the audience with something filled with emotion, and yet with a vague enough topic so everyone can relate.

"My heart is now all empty inside.
Now where does my love abide?"

^I found the repetition of these lines to be good, but not as powerful as it could have been. Perhaps a different wording, a different line or a completely different idea altogether?

Awww... wonderful!! So simple yet beautiful! Great job :)

A very cute and simple and moving poem. Its to the point with strong meaning. Great job.

victoria