Comments : It's over

  • 14 years ago

    by Obscura

    This is a good poem it has feeling the structure is good but please replace y with why it will make the poem look so much better

  • 14 years ago

    by Ezzey

    It is a beautiful poem indeed and your heart i guess is superb !

  • 14 years ago

    by Ezzey

    It is a very heartfelt poem ,,god bless you