Wow I was supprised your chioce of wording is brilliant, it added more depth to te piece =]
The flow works perfectly and I liked the chioce of structure, Excellent job 5/5

A very well thought out love poem with a strong choice of words, MaryAnne. I loved certain expressions, such as :" Fervent rainbow kisses,
Bask in the sun's lucid rays," and "Lulling the dawn of day,
Soft humming echoes,"

I think you made something really beautiful here, well done:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

A very well thought out love poem with a strong choice of words, MaryAnne. I loved certain expressions, such as :" Fervent rainbow kisses,
Bask in the sun's lucid rays," and "Lulling the dawn of day,
Soft humming echoes,"

I think you made something really beautiful here, well done:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Oh my goodness.. I havent read a poem like this in so very long.. I thought your first two stanzas were absoultely beautiful.. the word choice was awesome and painted awesome imagery.. Wow this was stunning.. you should be proud, I really thought you went above and beyond with your title here..

Great job!

5/5.

Temps (Beyond a Poets Mind)

Wow this is good the wording is very desciptive you can really picture it clearly there is not rythem but the emotion was really intese the structure is really well laid out within the poem

well done

Wow this poem was so beautify written.
i love how descriptive you were and the flow was excellent. you certainly have a way with word.
well done
5/5

-->Jess<--

Your words were beautiful and descripitive. The only problem with that is the fact that I believed because of all this poems "fluff" (and I mean that in the most commplimentary way) I wasn't able to grasp the real messag behind your poem.

You have a superb vocabulary and I give you koodoos on that. Unfortuantly I am not and audience member for this poem.

If I'm too blunt please tell me.