This is a great piece of work the imagry is so clear the words really bring it to life the structure is laid out brilliantly the rythem is really steady and contant flowing

the only thing i could see wrong was there was no periods at the end of paragraphs 4' 6' 7' 8 but other than that well done

Divinely kissed in the mist, baptized by my pain
Nourished gently like wild flowers in the rain.

*These were my favorite lines. I love the imagery here. It makes this such a beautiful poem. I'm also glad that your used periodic syntax as well. The style isn't one I use often but I think you did it well. Nice work. Nk*

I admire how you rhyme this poem, also like the imagery. You master this writing style. Well done, 5/5, kel.

I love the imagery in this poem.
also i think you expressed yourself well.
this is an amazing poem
well done
5/5

First of you did a great job with the poem. The imagery was really good in this poem and also your rhyming was different then most poems but for the most part you did a great job with it. The flow also was good and you had a great chose of words in this poem and that made it that much better. The emotion in this poem I can also tell was really great and all in all you did a great job and the only thing wrong would be punctuation but thats okay though. So good job and a 5/5 from me.

A very inspiring piece. I wont go through the style, flow, rhyming etc as you already have outdone these basics..I admired the optimistic side of you, despite of all the pains, tragedy, sacrifices in this life yet you still manage to stand up with full trust in him..Good job..

This piece is wonderful!! The flow is flawless and its extremely touching. The imagery was perfect, like a movie in my head. Even though I'm not a religious person myself, I have to admire your faith and optimism. Also I like the format you have put this piece in, its different from what I usually read because most times I find the flow to be off, but you have done it perfectly. A truely great piece keep up the good work 5/5

I like the wording you chose, it works well. It creates more emotion in the poem. Good job.

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So deep, and dark. i like it . loved the words you chose. very meaningful