Stevie Sutter had a Stutter

This is an amusing little poem
brought a little grin to my face :)
i am happy stevie was able to
overcome his stutter :)

good job

Keenan

Poetic license flow like butter I must admit I have never seen butter flow?
As smooth as butter yes!
like the idea but to me unless it is a deliberate poetic license the poem does not work.
L2 - Yet he wanted his words to flow like water in a gutter or a ball hit with a putter or as smooth as butter

L7 - When his words flowed as smooth as butter
What do you think? Let us know if this is a help?

What a wonderful tongue twister you have created here. Ironic that the tongue twister is about a stutterer. I too use to stutter really bad and on occasion I sometimes still do. I was awful at it and took classes and now I answer thousands of phone calls a week. So I suppose I do okay for someone that use to stutter so badly. There is a great message in your write too for kids and adults who stutter to know it can be beaten. Thanks for the write. Enjoyed it thoroughly.
Take Care,
kay