A very sad poem..simply written but with so much emotions..
I enjoyed reading it.
I loved the word choice of ur last stanza the most

And like the thundering seas
He drops to his knees
With a surrender
That no one could render
Rolling white caps
Even the strong collapse
Stunned by the dark skies
Deaf from soundless cries
And the heart he has spilled
Will no longer be filled
With the pain of his dread
What else could he have said?
But "I'm sorry in every way
Till my final day."

found it pretty pretty touchy.

Woww! so beautiful! sad, but still beautiful. very unique style of writing & words. a deep poem, i like ones like these. best poem i've read tonight. nice work!