Hey, Skittle! Been ages since we've spoken, but I seen you had a couple new poems posted, and decided to check them out. (:

I quite like the idea of this as a song -- the sun metaphor (as I took it), was great. Simply as a poem, it feels a little weak to me. But set it to a melody, I feel like it'd be quite catchy and nice. Have you written music to it? I'd love to hear if you have. (:

Not sure why, but in my mind I've put it to an acousticy/maybe a tad folky tune. :P Haha.

Anyhow! I loook forward to your future poems, dear Skittle.

Love always,
Mallow!

Hey,

You have no idea how happy I am that your writing again. Greatness I say Yazimoto :P So as for the song I liked it and I too would love to hear it along with whatever style of music you have it set to. Bravo you always have a way of setting a mood.

Ciao,
Beck

That's so beautiful. Well done!!
5/5