You had a good point here, the twist at the end just showed that words really can and do affect ones mentality and the way that they live their lives. Good job :)

I liked this. Small, speedy stanzas, but with good reason. I liked how it seemed like you were the person with the answers, and then revealled yourself to be in a similar position. That interested me.

Brad

P.S. Please comment and vote on every poem you read.

P.P.S. Thank you for your comments on my poem 'Death to the Both'.