A snapshot of a stranger

by Melissa   Jun 24, 2009


I never noticed her, just two stools......a way;
we both sat with bleary eyes,
sipping silly concoctions of
fruit and rum

she had the sort of face
that blended,
like yellow and blue
and with a swipe of turpentine,
her existence could be erased-
no trace of green to perceive

it's jarring, how eyes grow lazy
with time;
and are nothing like the lens
of a newly born curiosity,
time no longer tickles the spine
with its meddlesome hands,
it just ticks...
until someone notices
who we were meant to see

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  • 14 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I really love this one, but that's nothing new with your poems : )
    This one encases so much...wonder, sadness, regret, and renewal.
    Great job...keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Man, I absolutely loved this poem
    she had the sort of face
    that blended,
    like yellow and blue
    and with a swipe of turpentine,
    her existence could be erased-
    no trace of green to perceive

    The way you put all three colors together were simply brilliant, great write indeed, and congrats on the win this week. Timothy r