Comments : A snapshot of a stranger

  • 14 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Man, I absolutely loved this poem
    she had the sort of face
    that blended,
    like yellow and blue
    and with a swipe of turpentine,
    her existence could be erased-
    no trace of green to perceive

    The way you put all three colors together were simply brilliant, great write indeed, and congrats on the win this week. Timothy r

  • 14 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I really love this one, but that's nothing new with your poems : )
    This one encases so much...wonder, sadness, regret, and renewal.
    Great job...keep it up!