Excellent use of metaphors. You have also used some vivid imagery and an articulate word choice in this creative piece. Nice job!

This piece is stunning, truly it is. Your vocab is so intense and some words I never have even heard of before. I love the word choice and imagery you created, this isn't like any piece I've read before. You should be very proud of this poem, you did a fantastic job! Congratulations on the win, you deserved it!

God Bless You!

~MaryAnne

Congratulations Mel :)
good work!

Great work here Mel. I enjoyed the flow of it, it was like a melancholy whisper as I read it in my head, I think that's the best way I can describe it.

I especially enjoyed the ending, the way you gave in.

You were,
a shape shifter
when tea leaves lied.
A fraction of illusion,
so I played for you tonight.

I thought it was a great ending.

Nice work, it was great from start to end.

Congrats Mel !!!!

Very deserving win hun, wonderfully penned