Brownie Battered Blizzard. [Tongue Twister]

by Courageous Dreamer   Jun 27, 2009


- - My first ever tongue twister?

One day I wanted a brownie batter blizzard
bursting with happiness to Blizzard Boulevard
I briskly bolted, blinded by black holes in the
broken cement; tripped backwards on my butt.
back up in a blast, banged into the door
but barged in; blurted brownie battered
blizzard with beaming blue eyes; brown bits of batter
blended into the blue blizzard bowl; within seconds
devouring my brownie battered blizzard, I blossomed
a beautiful smile and blasted out of Blizzard Boulevard.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Sigoney Holder

    This was great had to re read it but couldn't stop.

  • 14 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very original write, I enjoyed it. The flow was good as was the structure. I felt it could've perhaps been a little more twisting for one to read hence the name tounge twister; however, I thought you did a good job for your first one. Keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Thanks for the smiles and laughs this morning. Nice tongue twister.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Lol this was hard to read, but very funny. Godd job Temps :) Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was such a cute story and was a fun tongue twister, very long! Loved the imagery portrayed, this made me smile, thanks for that! 5/5 from me, take care and keep writing, always and forever.

    ~MaryAnne

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