Good Job! well written 5/5

'Constellations
scream above'
`I didnt really like scream here, I dont know why.. but I just cant imagine that

A well written poem though, simple and beautiful. Written with love. Well done.

This was a beautiful poem, the flow was right on target and the rhyming fit perfectly. Your words held so much meaning and I enjoyed this write. The only thing I didn't particulary like was how you said, "Constellations scream above", I don't know it just didn't fit for me. Otherwise, great job as alwasy. Keep writing, forever and always.

Have a good week.

~MaryAnne