Comments : Tell me you're as light as a feather and i'll believe it

  • 2 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    WOW!

    There is so much depth to this write!!

    I really love how direct this is, the format made me read it a few times over, and if i'm honest, when i see a format like this i usually lose interest after a few lines but I really like the narrative here :)

    Great write!