With Love

by Sourav   Jul 7, 2009


There's no love without you
Nor for that I really do care
But then in your magical hue
My every insanity looks so fair;

Like waves rush towards the shore
Moon's attraction for the earth
Thus your appeal or even more
My each step follows your path;

In tenderness of your loving flame
I can burn all despicable woes
Your eyes, there lies my fame
Deep in my veins your love flows;

Holds perfection in every moment
Your love is a gift, in it I find art
In my eloquence let me present
With love, my one doting heart.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Goodbye

    You succeeded once again to hit my heart. I love your poems a lot. Pieces of art, pleases my heart and soul. :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    In tenderness of your loving flame
    I can burn all despicable woes
    Your eyes, there lies my fame
    Deep in my veins your love flows

    ^^

    Wow Sourav....such passion and tenderness in your words. I love this poem, it has a certain kind of magic in it, the way all girls would like to be loved by an man:)

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    The first poem I have read as I start an adventure through the site. If this is the talent I will run into , I need some tips haha
    Good poem done with beauty

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sourav
    what a beautiful poem of love you have penned .

    Holds perfection in every moment
    Your love is a gift, in it I find art
    In my eloquence let me present
    With love, my one doting heart.

    I loved this stanza...it really touched me so much. The gift of the heart is the best gift you can give. It is giving unconditionaly of yourself. How special that is.
    Awesome job!
    Take Care
    ~Hugs~
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    'My each step follows your path;'
    `Try my every step.. sounds a bit better than what you have.

    'Your eyes, there lies my fame
    Deep in my veins your love flows;'
    `This could probly be reworded a bit to sound better.. maybe..
    `Your eyes hold my fame,
    and deep in my veins your love flows;'

    Really well written, you may have had some flow issues but other than that the words were beautiful and nicely spoken.

    5/5.

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