Midnight Serenade

by Lonely Rider   Jul 8, 2009


Beneath the midnight sky of June
cuddled in silky strands of moon,
violet blends reflected by
shimmering glow of firefly.

Daffodils in pinkish gown
crickets jumping all around,
pearls of dew rest on a bloom
near the tawny plump mushroom.

Slowly skyline stirs the hue
Orange mixed with tinge of blue,
grey silhouettes fade away
sunbeams spread its magic spray.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    I love the simplicity and expressiveness of this poem and it has a nice easy flow and an easy to follow meter. Just one thing the last line I think would be better if their was used instead of its.

    My kind of poetry simple and lovely to read Ray S 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Nice flow and good imagery.

  • 14 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    5/5.Wow!Believe,me the very first poem in my life which made me dance in my thoughts.The beautiful hue of colours,the flow,the imagery,are stunning.
    Keep going,you are really talented.God bless.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Well, this was a delightful read:)

    Daffodils in pinkish gown
    crickets jumping all around,
    pearls of dew rest on a bloom
    near the tawny plump mushroom.

    ^^

    This to me was the most descriptive stanza, but they were all very beautiful.

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Awesome flow and beautiful imagery. I loved how you used the word cuddled in the second line, truly unique. Well done.. only one word can truly describe this piece and thats beautiful.

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