Realization Of Hell

by kylexthexmagnificent   Jul 8, 2009


I see the darkness in my eyes,
i realize all that i despise is taking over.

my heart once pure of light,
is now losing the fight between wrong and right.

oh how burdened i've become,
with the disappearance of my sun,
my skies are pitch black.
darkness has begun.

sorrow fills the voids in the emptiness of my heart, poisonously expanding slowly pushing me apart.
pushing out the lingering light with the overwhelming dark.

hear my agonizing screams of pain,
as i pray to god in vain,
clenching my dying heart,
crimsonly stained.

Desolation plagues the atmosphere as i gasp for a desperate breath,
nothing but the echoes of my whimper is all thats left.
I lie awaiting the warm embrace of the seduction of death. I lie waiting til i am no more

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  • 14 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Very good imagery , and nice mix of freeverse and rhyme .

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Dark write wit great flow. With some editing could be perfect but it's a good write as it is.
    Enjoyed this much

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I love how you write
    You are an amazing writer and you
    never seize to amaze me.
    I love how you make everything fit
    perfectly together make them flow and
    Rhyme.You word things like never before.
    it was sad though:D
    5/5
    Take Care,
    -Kortney

  • 14 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Wow! This is just... Phenomenal.

    I love your style.

    I believe that this could be ever more amazing if the flow was a little more consistant but all the rest of the poem was brilliant.
    So saddd.

    -Osi

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