Comments : Poet's Rainbow

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    A masterpiece, very inspiring and a joy to read.
    Keep up the great work.
    Paul...

  • 14 years ago

    by Kid Kurious

    Wow....that right there was a very memorable piece! Metaphors are original and imagery is right on point! An ode to poets everywhere!
    Loved it! Keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "What lies dominant in a poets mind till exhumation?"

    I love when poems open up with a question, and this really made the reader think. I like the depth in your vocab, "exhumation" was a great word.

    "Imprisoned till the key is turned and shackles fall to the ground
    releasing an electrically charged rainbow lighting each corner of the spectrum
    from the depth of the soul to the blinding light of inspiration."

    The descriptions you give off and imagery just blow the reader away, you have such a unique and original way of expressing yourself, its so refreshing to the reader and everyone else.

    "........Color of Imagination.."

    I really thought it was brilliant how you repeated this "Color of...." throughout this piece, it added so much to this poem and just standing alone here, it holds much meaning.

    "Vibrant firework display of ideas that tease the typewriter"

    A very creative line, I found this extremely interesting.

    "imagination becomes the vehicle that turns the kaleidoscope wheel.
    Emotions colorful dance bring shame to the Aurora Borealis
    obscurity touches reality, surrealism morph to magic."

    Wow, amazing! How can anyone find any mistakes in this poem, it is just flawless. Your wording is not cliche in the least bit and holds my interest while at the same time changing my view and bringing me into a new one.

    "........Color of emotion.."

    Loved this, your brilliance shines here and everywhere.

    "Dream on Poet; let creative waters flow gently"

    You really inspire the reader here and give them encouragement, and "creative waters flow gently" was very calming and inspiring.

    "entertaining the curious, filling a dreamers heart."

    This part really got me, you describe so much of all, not leaving one thing out on the side.

    "Liquid words flow through your pen to solidify on paper"

    "Liquid words" I have not heard before, it added a nice touch.

    "solidify" was also a great word to use, since I don't hear it used much.

    "documenting the emotional creative moment."

    Well-penned so far, this is a masterpiece and well deserved of the win.

    ".......Colors of originality ..."

    The whole concept of this piece is brilliant itself and this line just strengthens the poem so much.

    "Absorb criticism yet strain it through understanding,
    savor reviews of enjoyment and fame.
    Tell the world your story in eloquent words of your own
    choosing freely or in rhyme."

    A flawless ending, so meaningful and deep. You are a brilliant poet and will go very far here on poems and quotes and in life. Already you have started off here with a win, so congratulations!

    I am sorry I did not comment this sooner, its a very late comment.

    5/5 from me, wish I could give more.

    Never stop writing, you have such talent

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Well how I missed this poem is a mystery as I take particular pride in using my votes to help pick the best poems of the week. In a way I am glad it is the last of this poets first three poems I have read as the old saying, 'Save the best to last', was certainly true of this poem. Its words are of a poet who understands words and love them and understands what all us poets!! try to attain in what we write. Beautifully written by a poet who knows his art and loves it. Ray S
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Kips2.0

    Lovely and witty. Well fashioned words with pictures well painted. Good poem!

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I can certainly see why this won the weekly contest,
    it was pure magic, completely original and pure genius

    I loved the wording in this, In really did like the way it all came together, and flowed flawlessly all the way through,
    I think you have a huge gift and you use it well,

    Love
    Tara
    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Another Great Write!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    I suddenly have a strong urge to go paint a rainbow. Haha. Anyway.

    I really loved reading this after reading your recent stuff. I can really see the improvement from reading this one and reading those. It's fantastic to see that.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by christopher

    Great well done t.j definitely a poetic gift you have i loved this poem especially the third stanza again well done

  • 12 years ago

    by tainted melody

    Wow! That was captivating. My favorite line was " liquid words flow through your pen to solidify on paper" It was such a creative way to describe the exitment a writer gets when their thoughts flow onto the paper. Great job