I love this poem. your a very good writer. keep up the good work.

pm me sometime, haha.. Sonya

My hands down favorite slang poem perfect and to the point, add me chick, u got style.

Good poem. lol. i love the last line. you have a real good writing style. check out some of my poems. good job. keep it up.

5/5

Love this poem U have a good style of writing Keep it up :)

Very good,
the last line made me smile :]
only issue is how you say 'you' in some parts, then switch to 'her'. that's my only vice, swear.
it's cool
i gave it a 5.

-Matty.

This is a cool poem. I love how you explain what happens. I like the ending lol :)
5/5, Em

AWESOME! 5/5