Comments : A Little Candle...

  • 8 years ago

    by keithnwv

    I really , really like this one!!!! What a picture of life when we are hurt and just try to hide from the world. For so long i have wanted to just live in the shadow of darkness instead of lighting my candle. I have the match out , just need the courage to strike it!

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Loved the quote and your words did it justice. I shall remember this when my days are dark, light a little candle. Well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    Olwin,
    You never cease to amaze me. You have grown so much as a poet. This is a very lovely write. I enjoyed it much!
    Thanks for sharing
    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 8 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    A good quote to remember and a good write on it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    So many things I've clouded,
    Shut out the sunshine's rays...
    I've forgot to light my candle,
    On the darkest of my days

    This is so true. We forget the good/lighter
    part of life whilst sitting in darkness. An
    eye opener write...great write!

  • 8 years ago

    by junet

    I like the message of this poem.

  • 8 years ago

    by Katie Lady

    Wow! I loved this poem, it made me question a lot of things. I like that you used the quote as inspiration. Really good job :) 5

    Katie

    ps. thanks for the comment!

  • 8 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    This is very nice. Full of hope, and a complete transformation from feeling powerless to seizing control. yes, 5/5 it is. Peace, W.

  • 8 years ago

    by Jackie

    An excellent poem, so poignant, 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Jay Perry Jr

    When im having a bad day ill think about this poem
    You did a excellent job on this poem :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Hawaiian Chick

    Wow this poem is amazing! I was absolutely blown away when I read it and it brought a smile to my face :) Great job and letting your point known!

  • 8 years ago

    by Hawaiian Chick

    Wow this poem is amazing! I was absolutely blown away when I read it and it brought a smile to my face :) Great job and letting your point known!

  • 8 years ago

    by Hawaiian Chick

    Wow this poem is amazing! I was absolutely blown away when I read it and it brought a smile to my face :) Great job and letting your point known!

  • 8 years ago

    by Samuel Dimafelix

    Wow!! i like the way you think and the way you made this piece.. you have a wide imagination and i really reallllly like this piece...... i will add this one as my favorite. 5/5 keep it up sis.

    -nightsan

  • 8 years ago

    by lisa

    Fabulous write-i love it
    Keep it up well done x

  • 8 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Very well done. In fact i song the words of it, and not only it really good, but it is meaningful. We can all relates to it. Very well done, 5/5, kel.

  • 7 years ago

    by Kuro

    I think it marvelous to receive inspiration from such a small quote. i really enjoyed this. it sort-of reminded me of the children's song: "this little light of mine, im gonna let it shine ect"

    you can apply this outlook to our own lifestyles and struggles, or even use it as an illustration for religious views.

    either way, very well done
    ~Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Aish

    This made me smile, very poignant, nice rhythm and easy to read.
    5/5
    aish
    xx

  • 7 years ago

    by anand singh

    The message this beautiful portrays are one of importance that anyone can learn from.So often we shut out the light and get lost in the darkness.
    A trully wonderful write.
    An enjoyable read.
    Paul...

  • 7 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Penned!!!