I really , really like this one!!!! What a picture of life when we are hurt and just try to hide from the world. For so long i have wanted to just live in the shadow of darkness instead of lighting my candle. I have the match out , just need the courage to strike it!

Loved the quote and your words did it justice. I shall remember this when my days are dark, light a little candle. Well done.

Olwin,
You never cease to amaze me. You have grown so much as a poet. This is a very lovely write. I enjoyed it much!
Thanks for sharing
Take Care,
Kay

A good quote to remember and a good write on it.

So many things I've clouded,
Shut out the sunshine's rays...
I've forgot to light my candle,
On the darkest of my days

This is so true. We forget the good/lighter
part of life whilst sitting in darkness. An
eye opener write...great write!

I like the message of this poem.

Wow! I loved this poem, it made me question a lot of things. I like that you used the quote as inspiration. Really good job :) 5

Katie

ps. thanks for the comment!

This is very nice. Full of hope, and a complete transformation from feeling powerless to seizing control. yes, 5/5 it is. Peace, W.

An excellent poem, so poignant, 5/5

When im having a bad day ill think about this poem
You did a excellent job on this poem :)

Wow this poem is amazing! I was absolutely blown away when I read it and it brought a smile to my face :) Great job and letting your point known!

Wow this poem is amazing! I was absolutely blown away when I read it and it brought a smile to my face :) Great job and letting your point known!

Wow this poem is amazing! I was absolutely blown away when I read it and it brought a smile to my face :) Great job and letting your point known!

Wow!! i like the way you think and the way you made this piece.. you have a wide imagination and i really reallllly like this piece...... i will add this one as my favorite. 5/5 keep it up sis.

-nightsan

Fabulous write-i love it
Keep it up well done x

Very well done. In fact i song the words of it, and not only it really good, but it is meaningful. We can all relates to it. Very well done, 5/5, kel.

I think it marvelous to receive inspiration from such a small quote. i really enjoyed this. it sort-of reminded me of the children's song: "this little light of mine, im gonna let it shine ect"

you can apply this outlook to our own lifestyles and struggles, or even use it as an illustration for religious views.

either way, very well done
~Ben

This made me smile, very poignant, nice rhythm and easy to read.
5/5
aish
xx

The message this beautiful portrays are one of importance that anyone can learn from.So often we shut out the light and get lost in the darkness.
A trully wonderful write.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...

Very Nicely Penned!!!