Comments : A Little Candle...

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    If I was u id put this under life then inspiring poems..regarding categories... cause this inspired me and it is related to many of our lives.

    we, humans, most of us refuse to see thats gd things around us and choose to focus on our sorrow and pain..and I find it so wise to litle a candle that may slap out sleeping insights about what we DO have and what we CAN feel satisfied about.

    A thought provoking poem, thats written in a very inspiring way.
    Loved ur ideas

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    So many things I've clouded,
    Shut out the sunshine's rays...
    I've forgot to light my candle,
    On the darkest of my days.

    I chose this stanza cause it speaks about a lot of what many of those around u, and Im one of them would do:)

    5/5
    keep writing
    it suits u

  • 13 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Well well well…. Im going to go as far as to say...
    That I come across a poem this good
    Probably once every blue moon.

    This poem is very very amazing. Definitely
    Worth publishing. I beg you… please read
    Another of mine, and thus force me to
    “GLADLY” read another of yours.

  • 13 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Lovely Poem, Enjoyed!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    Nice poem..very poignant

  • 13 years ago

    by ChrisT

    This poem is amazing i could see myself in the poem.. the picture of darkness surrounding me with just one little candle giving me hope wonderful poem!!

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I went back to read some of your poems that over time I had missed so far this is my very favorite..

  • 10 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    This poem is unbelievable. Its so good and full of passion. I love how we can draw inspiration from the little things in life. You are a wonderful poet. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by DarkKnight

    This Is really great....light one for me Olwin...cool name too

  • 10 years ago

    by Mohan

    Wonderfull

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Awesome !!!!

    "Won't let winds blow out it's brightness,
    It's a little flame I know....
    But it cheers my heart with gladness
    As my journey I forego.

  • 8 years ago

    by Lauren

    This is truly an inspirational piece!! So much passion and strength, amazing.