Comments : You Were Mine

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Awesome flow and true expression of emotions and looking back on the past and present wishing someone was still yours, yet they arent. The future is unpredicatable though, you should always live for the future cause you dont know what it will bring. Dont get so hung up on something you cant change.. right? :] Your words in this write are truly something that a lot could relate to. A good job again!

  • 14 years ago

    by JustKristina

    This is great Tara! The flow within this piece is wonderful and it shows such raw and relateable emotion. You did a really good job love. Keep it up. I"m always here for yah!