Reserve a place within your heart
for me to get a running start.
Don't leave me here limping behind
as I try to rub away the blind.
*I loved this stanza. My favorite ^.^ This was such a sad piece..but Damn you can rhyme Jen. *reaches inside your brain trying to steal your rhyming skills* Lol great work hun. I really enjoyed this. *claps for you* Nik*
The pro of rhyming :] Well done! I enjoyed this write although it was sad, I thought the repetition was good, not overdone or annoying. Emotions were visible to the reader, so deep that I can imagine this person sitting in a corner writing this with tears in their eyes. Well done!