I l ove when a poem ends with a single word that makes the whole thing beautiful, i think you've really achieved that with this one.

A very optimistic poem, unlike the previous one I read. I think that every poet wrote a poem about the will to never surrender. I myself have a poem on such a subject. The word use here was better, the rhyming scheme and flow fit. Overall, you still can use a higher vocabulary, but I guess that it's just your style.

A good poem 5/5