Really sad, could tell it was fro the heart... Beautiful!

Really sad, could tell it was from the heart... Beautiful!

It is sad and sometimes when we tell people whatever it takes to be happy we don't expect the results we get. Well done.

I could hear you speak these words of hurt
as I read this poem..it tugs at the heart..a
touching write. Take care.

Although a person leaves, they never leave our hearts. They always there in some way. I think youve portrayed that well here.. simple write but I loved your new format. Nice to see something new.

That was beautiful, and so very sad. The ending was wonderfuly written. The only thing wrong was that the flow was a little shaky in the beggining. But the ending, like I said, was superb! 5/5

-mandy :)

Such sadness emanated from each word. Letting go is the hardest of all. To feel that person drifting from you and know that you must release them. To be the one standing alone is painful.
An emotional piece, written with heart.
Impressive

I love this poem it reminds me of my first crush :) i feel you always write the best poems because you take the reader with you on the journey. your writing is so real and it really hits me. great word choice and the flow is perfect. brilliant! 5/5 *hugs* katie

What a beautiful and heartfelt poem this is. Letting someone go is never easy but the ring of maturity this held was very inspiring. Good job, 5/5

It's always sad when a relationship breaks apart.The one left standing alone feels it most in the pit of their heart.
But the memory and keepsakes of the heart continues to dwell in the back of our minds.
A very sad and painful write yet, penned so beautifully.
Paul...

Nice job on your poem. I know this feeling well.
Take Care