Comments : Loves Embrace

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    What a sensual poem, Deana:)

    Nothing forced about this write, it flowed and rhymed and made me see truly passionate images and it jiust oozes sweet love:)

    Gentle power, a raging storm
    Fulfill two hearts desire

    ^^
    It's funny how this can be gentle and forceful at the same time, but it is..unless you have a real brute on your hands, lol!

    Nice work, my friend!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned. Excellent flow and word choice!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sourav

    Lovely flow and a very well depicted poem indeed. I liked the binding of the words. Very well written!

  • 14 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    Oh, yes. Very strongly worded. Very emotional throughout. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    You painted a scene of such sweet love and affection. this was a very pleasant read =) 5*