Get Out of my Head

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Aug 8, 2009


I want to scream into your head
to show you memories undead.
This fire burning in my mind
hasn't proven to be kind.

GET OUT.
GET OUT.
GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!!!

These thoughts twisted and torn apart
show the scars left within my heart.
Tangled in my darkest thought
are mysteries you've never sought.

GET OUT.
GET OUT.
GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!!!

It pricks and prods for explosion
so my sanity starts erosion.
The bruises you've left may seem healed
but underneath pain is revealed.

GET OUT.
GET OUT.
GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!!!

These happenings from long ago
stay hidden and let no one know,
though there are times I wish to tell;
to reach out and show I'm not well.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Woh... This is an awesome write, that's full of emotion, that you have so well expressed. I love the style, the wording, the rhyming.... EVERYTHING about this poem. You are quite a writer :)

    Very impressive.
    Olwin.

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    Jen I totally love this poem. It's just so raw and filled with anger. I like how you used caps for the repeated stanza...it just shouts to the readers.
    Great Job

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    'Tanlged in my darkest thought'
    `Tangled

    'It pricks and prods for explosion
    so my sanity starts erosion.'
    `Very well written, probably the most original lines Ive read today!

    '
    GET OUT.
    GET OUT.
    GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!!!'
    `Such powerful words and writing them in caps and putting "!!!!" after really emphasizes the anger of the reader to the fullest extent.

    A good poem about how something has stuck in your mind from the past and you cant get it out of your mind and it feels like you are losing your sanity.

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