The Key

by Deana   Aug 10, 2009


Fingertips covered in ivory lace
reached for his hand , bronzed by the sun
Slowly pulling him closer,
beyond the cream colored curtain of dreams

Come with me...

Happiness and hope, locked away
The sky turned lavender gray and angry
As a storm threatened to wash away the magic
lightening lit the universe, with doubt

Stay with me...

Time stood still, eyes locked in silence
Turquoise met the strength of jade
Liquid fire, ablaze in the soul
A world of illusion, transported to days of old

Believe with me...

Riding together upon a fallow wind
Above the calming aqua-marine sea
Held on tightly, floating free together
and there on platinum clouds, we found the key

Love with me...

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  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I donu what to say for you, you belong to a differen place ..realy u have such amazing-ness with words...like 1st the title caught me..then despie the tenderness in ur stanzas these lines
    played a gr8 role
    for the harmony of your poem

    Come with me...

    Stay with me...

    Believe with me...

    Love with me...

    ...lol i wana u write with me..lol..your gr8 !
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    WOW i loved this poem, each stanza had an array of powerful words and meaning, and i loved how after each stanza there were those few words. It all built up to the fabulous end as well.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Deana
    What a beautiful poem of love. I have missed reading your verses.
    Excellent job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Liz

    Deana,
    this poem was so beautiful. i don't think there's anything else that can describe this.
    i love the details, and how you used different colors to describe things.
    it made it easier for me to picture everything in my head.
    such a beautiful love poem, it deserves to be on the front page! lol

    love,
    Liz

  • 14 years ago

    by Nee

    Deee :)
    So proud of you..loved your poem, though I could see you do better.
    Lovely imagery honey.
    Way to go :)
    Write on~

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