Comments : I have pictures of you

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    My type of poem simple easy to read with all the good qualities I like of my poetry. flow. meter with sufficient contents to stir the emotions as I am sure as you get older you will some day in your life do as you said in your poem:

    So, I close my eyes, and remember,
    when I used to take pictures of you.

    Thank God time is a great healer.
    Excellent 5/5 Ray S

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Aw... A sweet write, with a touch of sadness in it. These lines touched my heart...

    "I wish you were still here with me.
    Here with me for real, and forever"

    A very heartfelt write... that is just beautifully written. I loved it. Well done.