Comments : Family

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    Im really suprised as to how well it sounded. the rhyming was really nice and it made the poem flow nice and smoothly. and its always nice to have a family that supports you.

    well done
    ~Ben

  • 14 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    Thx.....thats was nice.

  • 14 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    Thx.....thats was nice.

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I love it, such a sweet dedication to your family. Very inspirational. 5/5, Em x

  • 14 years ago

    by Obscura

    This is a really moving powerful poem really capturing the close bond between family theres so much emotion in this the rythem is smooth and flowing and the stucture is well built in the poem

    well done 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by mckenzie

    Ben and black fox pretty much wrapped it up alright.

    its an outstanding piece dedicated to loved ones. very refreshing and nice to see such heartfelt appreciation. the genuineness touched me indeed.