Short and sweet. Your poems are very touching, and always reach out to your readers. Fantastic work!

mandy :)

Wow, excellent senryu Ingrid, short but filled with so much meaning and striking to the reader. A pleasure to read, keep up the great work!

~MaryAnne

So few words but truer words were never spoken. Well done.

Yes yes yes youve said it all. I cant say much more than whats been said. Good job. :)

Very impressive for a short form. You have indeed said so much in so little. Great Job

Take Care,
Kay

How true are your words and you have written it well using this form! Liked it :)

What a message you delivered in such few lines. That is what makes this form so difficult. You did a great job!

Nicely done.
I can't say much more then what has been said. You were able to say so much in a difficult form .

Wonerfully Done Senryu Ingrid!!!

Very well done senryu..In only a few words you have penned a beautiful piece that project a strong message.
Keep up the great work.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...

Such a very special little piece..this is the form u said i did well with..but if mine was perfect
then for god sake tell me what should I name this !

by God's most gifted ??
ur one of the most gifted..
its a shame u dont write anymore/
despite your reasons which I know..

you must get back to the stage
5/5

Ingrid,

Syllable count right.
Good title.
Strong mess.....

No, I'm just joking - I wouldn't dare to presume to offer you any advice on form. This is an excellent senryu which I enjoyed.
All the very best and I hope you are well,
Ben