Comments : Unwelcomed Visitor (Lento)

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hey Meena:)

    All through the poem I was thinking "who could it be about?????"and then I read the last two words, lol!

    Good one, good job on the format as well and let's hope it will not be as bad as anticipated with this flu!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Well said. This is one visitor that I hope does not visit my home, nor his brother, the regular seasonal flu.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A wonderful write Meena. Your poem had me captured from the start! A great job on the form too. Brilliant!

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Meena you are amazing :=) I loved it from start to finish.