Comments : One of a Kind

  • 14 years ago

    by keithnwv

    I was able to create great visuals while reading this.

    Wonderful writing!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This was such a sweet poem, and I thought it told a lovely story, but also held a very nice memory that will forever be remembered. I really enjoyed the pace of the poem, and I think your layout worked well for this. I also felt quite relaxed reading it, it was all very innocent and such a pleasurable scene to witness and feel a part of.

    a ground hog peeked through bushes

    ^ that line, Groundhog can be just one word ;)

    Lovely little write, which your title suggests.