The Four Seasons ( String Haiku)

Such clear images of the four seasons you have given me here Ingrid, in this very descriptive and use of well thought out words.
It brought all the seasons to life in every stanza that I read, exciting me in anticipation as to what the next line would say.
You have taken my breath away with this colourful write Ingrid!

OOOMMMMMGGGGGGG

I always say i love double stanzas
when its a haiku or these little froms..cause i need details to love a poem
and here
waaaaooooohhhhhhh

this is maybe the best ever ever ever nature AND haiku I ever ever read

so many descriptions...
such a creative diamon my Ingrid is

am gna give u a call soon lol

5/5

Wow, this was really good. i give it 5/5 because...

1. firstly it is a unique style which takes great talent and time to make this work well, and you did that.

2. with each line you created a clear image using your language choice and made me as a reader picture the scene as i read along, which is fantastic. makes it nice to read.

3. it was a light subject and not heavy. one which is not wrote very often about in a high standard way.

4. you managed to make me read from start to end without getting bored, and i didnt pick up on any mistakes so have no suggestion for improvements.

5. i thought the title was a good fit to your poem.

my favourite line is icicles sparkle.... because thats what is happening here right now!!!

good job, i liked it very much and hope to read mroe from you.

take care xx

Excellent Job, a Most Lovely Write!!!

This was a pleasure to read and what imagery was given off! I have seen this done before on here but this one just stuck out from the rest. The wording was what really got to me and I wouldn't change one word in this piece. Keep it up!

God bless you.

~MaryAnne