Comments : Irresistable

  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    Wonderful - smart and thought provoking and filled with emotion.

  • 14 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Very well expressed emotions throughout, really enjoyed the rhyme and wit within this poem. The sway from uncertainty to confirmation of both your love was great. Well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Yes I must agree with Frank this was kind of 'very complex' lol. The word choice was more advanced, not so much but the way it all rhymed was unbelieveable. This was definatly taken to a whole new level, I very much enjoyed this. Great work & welcome to the site! It's lovely here. (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    This is absolutely wonderufk. Beautifully written with powerful words. 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I meant wonderful lol :)