Comments : Teddy and Me

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    I really enjoyed this poem. I love how you reverted back to the childlike emotions us girls tend to go through, talking to our teddy bears. I adored the theme of this poem. Though in my opinion I think that perhaps you should have used the correct punctuation in your contractions. But, that did not take away from the poem it's just technicalities. We are all poetically inclined to write as we wish. This was a very lighthearted read and I enjoyed it alot. 5/5

    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Lighthearted and fun to read. Teddy is the one friend as you said that will never betray our secrets and will always listen to us and be there. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very simply written, a cute children's poem!

  • 14 years ago

    by Natures Calling

    Very cute. I think many girls can relate to this poem

  • 14 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Can i borrow your fuzzy blue teddy???

  • 8 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    ARRRRGHGHHHHH, I am so glad I found this!! - you know how much I will relate to this poem, and you will know exactly why!

    This one really sits in my heart and I love it so much!! <3