This is a very passionate love poem with a free verse style that I envy

I really enjoyed reading this

AWsome and super fly poem, but why would the guy walk away. well 5/5 for the poem. ttyl.

You deff. have a way of writing unique pieces of poetry. I liked this piece, it was original. You really like to describe what you see, which is great, but you could really highten you piece by describing all your sences, That's my opinion of course. Overall nice Job!

Peace, Joe