Jealousy Part I

by The Poetic Child   Aug 28, 2009


Got all types of Angered Passion,
And you'll be the death of me
While I sit here, confined with jealousy
But jealousy will be the best of me

I go off, I Go off, something you cant contest with me
because I'm quick to lose my switch..never mess with me
Everything I usually do, Im careful to do it heavenly
But you never see my anger, while you sit and message me

When your with your friends, its like your Forgettin me
But If I try to hang out with mine, your there sweatin me
But i know when your with guys, i start to feel that jealousy
An un-common ground of agreement, and im just resetn me

Im trying to let you be yourself, But im just not lettin me
But I cant bare to even lose you, so now im just repentn me
you say i dont understand you, but baby your not gettin me
Im trying to give you everything i got, just whats left of me

If a guy talks to you, its like anger is over shedding me
and im melting in this state of mind, so baby melt wit me
You know no one can make you feel like you felt with me
I hate being so jealous, but I have god here helping me

Got all types of Angered Passion,
And you'll be the death of me
While I sit here, confined with jealousy
But jealousy will be the best of me

I love you baby so much, so just be here loving me
And when I see you face to face i want you Hugging me
I love being wit you Girl, trust me it aint too rough for me
Cause i know i got your love, and thats just enough for me

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Got all types of Angered Passion,
    And you'll be the death of me
    While I sit here, confined with jealousy
    But jealousy will be the best of me

    *This was my favorite part. I think you are really good with rhyming. You had both end rhyme and internal rhyme which is hard for some people. One thing I would change is how you randomly capatilized words in your stanzas, that threw me off a little. Other than that I think you did a great job with expressing how you feel about this person and how she makes you feel. I think you expressed your emotions very clearly and I can relate to some of the things you said. This was a very well written poem. Keep it up hun. I'm glad I read it. Nik*

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