What Fools We Are (Joseph Star)

by Meena Krish   Aug 29, 2009


---------------Love
----------we search for
-------far and wide but fail
--We dont see the love near by
--the one that has toiled with us
-----What fools we are God
----------to lose loves
---------------hand

The Joseph's Star form
This poem has no rhyme, and is written according to syllable counts. Syllables are 1, 3, 5, 7, 7, 5, 3, and 1. The poem may be written on any subject, be center aligned, has no stanza limit, and should have complete statements in each line.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I have grown to believe in the phrase that you shouldnt go searching for love, rather you should let it come to you. Indeed we all go searching for that perfect person, and in the end they are right before our eyes--and we had no idea that whole time. You penned this nicely, it is the truth!(:

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Yup Meena...how often are we blinded and don't see the love we had in our hands until it has slipped away and we are left empty handed...

    If only we should realize all people are flawed and knew how to accept each other as we are!

    Well done on this:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Meena
    Beautifully penned poem. How true your words ring. Great job on the club form challenge.
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A wonderful poem.... we do indeed fail to see/appreciate the love of our near and dear ones sometimes. Its so taken for granted. A very good job on the challenge Meena!

    All the best :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Sometimes people do search for love and don't see it right before their eyes. Good job with the form as well.

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