Comments : A different way to go

  • 14 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Beautiful! :)
    You should run to Him when you feel sad, always. He will always be there to wrap His arms around you. I've said that before, and it's beyond true.
    This was a beautiful write, I'm surprised nobody has commented yet!
    5/5 :)

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Oh Gosh...This piece is tearing me apart for i could feel the pain while writing this down and the effort to release all these emotions. I was in that state where only God was the closest, the only one, my bestfriend, and who never gave up on me after all those things..Its mysterious how it would ease your pain right after you speak to him without having the need of physical appearances..Hope you are ok now Matt..

  • 14 years ago

    by Anton

    Awsome poem man. such raw emotion. Its as if little was change from how u felt to the words in the poem it self. I hope begin to understand the Grace of God more and more as u grow in ur FAITH. God bless,
    anton.

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    Wow, there is so much emotion in this! Its very well written, and the flow was great. Nice job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ashley

    Very nice :) I loved the rhyme schemes