Comments : Unleashing....Lucifera

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was a great write with your own unique spin to it. I don't think I've seen someone write about their alter-ego before so I must say you are the first. Interesting write here, although simple I enjoyed it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    I sure hope mine isn't trying to escape from a mirror...LOL....I truely enjouyed this piece.
    Great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I agree... A very unique write! I enjoyed reading this :) Well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    You have given me something to think about. I never thought to give my alter ego a name. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Oh yes we all have a darker side that scares
    us more then anything else. Liked the rhyme
    & flow..good :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Wow I actually loved this. 5/5 x x

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    My dark side or alter ego at times gives me fits. Keeping it in control isn't always easy but necessary
    A good write for sure

  • 14 years ago

    by RavingMoonDoll

    I definitly agee with the other this was such a creative and unique piece of art. bravo :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I thought this was a very interesting poem. Your ideas are new and that's refreshing to see. Keep it up :) Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by mckenzie

    Gothic child was the name of mine. but i've finally killed him. good poem.